I like it, but I think it could be better
I enjoy the tune you have here and it all goes together fairly well. But for some reason I just feel it needs to build up more than it does and a little faster than it does as well. I am a big fan of Drum beats backing up music and I think you could definitely pump up your drums a lot.
i could definetly do that your advise would indeed give the some more 'volume'. it sounds so empty now. a few drums, but it's take away the ambience. But hey, i dont care about that so i'll just make a new version :)
Needs Bass, Needs Drum
I really like the sounds you have going here but to really make it good I think you need more Bass to back up your melody and then definitely some stronger Drum beats to keep it all moving together.
just kinda a chill song to listen to
This is a nice song to just turn on and lay back to relax to, I like you're riffs but I feel like the song doesn't really "move" well enough, some of you're transitions seem kinda of sudden and don't melt into each other very well, if you know what I mean. Otherwise I think its a pretty fun song.
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