I like it, but I think it could be better

I enjoy the tune you have here and it all goes together fairly well. But for some reason I just feel it needs to build up more than it does and a little faster than it does as well. I am a big fan of Drum beats backing up music and I think you could definitely pump up your drums a lot.

Needs Bass, Needs Drum

I really like the sounds you have going here but to really make it good I think you need more Bass to back up your melody and then definitely some stronger Drum beats to keep it all moving together.

just kinda a chill song to listen to

This is a nice song to just turn on and lay back to relax to, I like you're riffs but I feel like the song doesn't really "move" well enough, some of you're transitions seem kinda of sudden and don't melt into each other very well, if you know what I mean. Otherwise I think its a pretty fun song.